Non-fiction is NOT fiction

An invitation to what looks like a great fiction-writing course came in today’s email, with a “sneak peek” at one of its lessons:

Trust Yourself

As a writer, you have to keep all of the elements of craft in your head at once. But, as Bell suggests, “if you are trying to think of them as you write, you’ll tense up.” To this end, it’s a good idea to NOT think about these elements too much as you write your first draft. Tune out your inner editor. Allow yourself to take risks; write freely and without inhibition. Trust your instincts.

The important part is that your hand keeps moving, writing paragraph after paragraph, scene after scene, page after page. After you’re finished with your first draft, then you can go back and polish it, paying attention to the elements of craft, refining your characters and their motivations, heightening the conflict, and reorganizing the structure.

Sign up today for Write Great Fiction: Revision & Self-Editing and take advantage of the 20% off any September and October course by using coupon code SEPT209 at checkout.

(I left the sign-up info in because it looks like a good course–and because I want to balance my use of it as a negative example.)

This is NOT the way to write great NON-fiction. This is the way to write non-fiction slowly, painfully, and unproductively. It may be cathartic, or have other benefits, but it is just what my methodology (Joel’s BookProgram) was designed to remedy.

To write non-fiction well and quickly, you do the following:

  • First create your structure. The structure bears your message.
  • Within the structure, remember that “the diamond is your friend.” This tells you exactly what your structure must do to serve your message–and thus, your reader.
  • You do NO writing until the structure is COMPLETE. Then you ZipWrite, quickly and easily.

I’m grateful to Brian Klems, the Writer’s Digest Online Community editor, for giving me the opportunity to verbalize this clear contrast between great fiction writing and great non-fiction writing.

Fascinating account of polymath scientist turned writer

THE LAST DAYS OF THE POLYMATH

Blend. Or don’t. Just be aware.

Hidden man

More of this amazing work http://bit.ly/5Me43I

My friend Stuart Silverstone just sent me a link to a page of amazing photographs, like the one you see here. The artist paints himself to match the background, and thus when photographed appropriately, literally “fades into the background.”

Camouflage: it’s an important lesson. Sometimes you want to hide things in plain sight. Other times, you want them to stand out. The wonderful thing about writing is that it enables you to do both.

Are you making an important point to your reader? Then don’t let it blend with the colors of the background. Use your words to say, “this is something important, something to which you should pay attention.” Make your point into a heading. Define it. Talk about why it is important.

Perhaps you are writing to a reader who is in a stressful situation. You want to acknowledge the situation, but you don’t want to dwell on it. That situation is not your topic: it is the backdrop for your message. “Since September 11, 2001, teachers in New York City have had to deal with the effects of the events of that day on their students. Here is a list of best practices developed by a group of teachers…”

Foreground; background; it’s your choice. Don’t let your messafe gets lost in the background accidentally, and don’t allow the background to take over your prose when that is not your intention.

Publisher’s Lunch: Best Buy Will Sell eReaders, Including New iRex, Chainwide

IRex is providing additional details about the marketing of their new digital reader in the US this fall–which will be sold through Best Buy, where the NYT reports that the chain “is training thousands of its employees in how to talk about and demonstrate devices like the Sony Reader and iRex, and adding a new area to its 1,048 stores to showcase the devices.” Up until now, the retailer has sold ereaders online and only “in limited tests in stores.” Best Buy svp for entertainment Chris Homeister says “we feel that this is a technology that is beginning to emerge and that we can bring a unique experience to the marketplace.”

iRex is pricing their new device, which will be on sale by next month, at $399. With a previously-announced 8.1 touchscreen, it’s bigger than a regular Kindle/Sony Reader but smaller than a SuperKindle/Plastic Logic reader. Verizon has been announced as their provider of wireless access–and unlike Kindle, the iRex’s wireless chip will allow it to connect, and download reading material, outside of the United States.
iRex site
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Gizmodo: 1st peek at Microsoft tablet

It feels like the whole world is holding its breath for the Apple tablet. But maybe we’ve all been dreaming about the wrong device. This is Courier, Microsoft’s astonishing take on the tablet. More (including video)

Coach: Check out Milana’s contest

If you are a coach, consider entering Milana’s “Coaching Entrepreneur of the Year” contest. It’s free. (I’m a judge.) http://bit.ly/1w2UH1

The prizes are impressive! Hope to see you in Dallas in October!

Mary Travers of Peter, Paul and Mary

Good bye, dear Mary. Thank you!

Speak your book

Dictation software has improved to the point where it is actually practical for writing. The challenge, of course, is that when we talk, we don’t necessarily structure our utterances according to plan.

Speak your book!

The methodology I teach for book writing — Joel’s BookProgram™ — has as its central meme, “structure before content.” If you create your structure, you can then easily dictate the segments at the lowest level of the structure. In the case of a book, this would probably be subchapters — portions that are 200 to 600 words in length.

Why use dictation software? For many, speaking is easier than writing. Most people can speak much faster than they can type.

I have found another, more subtle, reason for dictating rather than writing: speaking seems to come from a different place in my brain. As a result, what I dictate often has more emotion than what I write, even more authenticity.

Why not use dictation software? For one thing, even though speech recognition has improved dramatically in recent years, the software still introduces weird errors, due to imperfect recognition. That is actually not a significant disadvantage, since most writing needs a round of editing anyway.

There’s the cost of a package that includes software and a high-quality microphone. Current prices are around $200, for the leading PC and Mac software.

There is also a learning curve, both in terms of getting used to dictating instead of typing, and in terms of using your voice to control your computer and perform editing functions during the dictation process.

Can dictation take the place of transcription? Yes and no. Transcribers can handle noisy input, and multiple speakers in the same recording; dictation software cannot.

The most popular packages by far on the market today are Dragon Dictate for the PC, and MacSpeech Dictate for the Mac (also built on Dragon technology). Both are about  $200, and come with a good quality microphone. Incidentally, the quality of the microphone is critical; don’t try to save money by buying a cheap mike.

In short, dictation can:

  • Save you time
  • Make your writing sound more authentic
  • Require you to learn a new workflow

Dictation may not work for everyone, but for most book authors, it’s worth a shot.

Want a table at the Jack London Writers Conference?

My friend, writer Martha Engber, is looking for 1 or 2 people to share a table at this conference:

I’d like to market my two books at the Jack London Writers Conference, a large and local two-day event that brings writers from all over the Bay Area. The conference is Friday and Saturday, Oct. 9 and 10, at the Crowne Plaza Center in Foster City. Here’s the URL: http://www.jacklondonwritersconference.org/.

I’m looking for two other writers who would like to split the cost of the table in order to sell their books/writing services/workshops. Would you be interested?

If so, how many other writers would you need to split the cost of the table to make the effort worthwhile? (Two writers would each pay $125, three would each pay $83, etc.).

Write to Martha: martha@engber.com

copyblogger: How to write with a knife

Outstanding writing advice from copyblogger:

Think it’s impossible to write with a knife?

Not at all. You might even say it’s essential.

Well, to be more precise, no one actually writes with a knife. But good writers do edit with one.

For them, writing involves two separate but closely intertwined mindsets: crafting their message and then cutting away everything that’s not their message.

Yesterday, Jon Morrow talked about why you need to tighten up your writing. Today we’re going to talk about how.

Write for yourself, edit for your readers

Really good writing always begins with the desire for self-expression. Let your mind and heart say what they want without restriction. You’re rough-hewing the shape of your thoughts.

But once the broad contours have emerged in your first draft, you take your knife and carve off all the extra bits. Sculpt your article until the important details are clear, not hidden by chunks of irrelevant or uninteresting verbiage.

It isn’t easy. As writers, we all have a tendency to fall in love with our words. So here are seven tips to help you cut to the chase.

1. Find the spine of your content and stick to it

A blog post is a focused piece of writing — it shouldn’t aim to address more than one tightly focused topic.

Yes, that story about your telecommuting co-worker and her embarrassing webcam moment is pretty darn funny. But if you can’t make it 100% relevant to the point you’re trying to make, don’t use it.

You can’t make your audience chuckle if they’ve clicked away.

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